Evaluation Question 1

Seventh & Final Draft

We have changed the voice over in this draft. This is because it wasn't loud enough so the audio kept on dipping in the clip, also we felt Steve needed to sound more nervous. Also it sounded more like a narrative than a police interview this is why we decided to change it.

Sixth Draft

This was only a quick and simple change to this draft we decided to change and remove the girl laughing, we decided this as it doesn't fit in with our narrative due to the laughing girl sound very young and Grace looks make more older than that.

Fifth Draft

In this draft we have decided to add in the title for the opening. We have decided to add the colour of red as it has connotations of danger which is like horror films which are constantly danger. Also the colour makes it stand out against the black and white filters we have on the scenes.

Fourth Draft

This is draft number 4 which has some more improvements that we have decided to add. We have added a extra shot in of Capman in the garden. This was due to in case people wouldn't notice Capman in the background.
We also added in a voice over of a police interview of Steve being interviewed. This is so the audience do not get confused and what the opening is about, therefore by adding a voice over people would have more of a understanding what is happening.

Third Draft

This is the third draft that we have produced. This draft has the amendments that we have put in like the name at the start and the clips in black and white.

Second Draft

This is edit number 2 on our film opening, we have added brand new footage as we as a group decided to re film the footage. This is much better quality footage, the quality was much higher and the costumes of the actors are much better than the first draft. We edited this on Final Cut Pro X.