First Draft

This is our first draft for our film opening and it's got the correct structure but there are some issues that need to be fixed.

1. The first shot.
This shot is to light, we wanted the fully effect of the car lights in the dark evening and this is more at a dusk time so this needs to change so we have the full effect.

2. Walking shot.
This shot changes the lighting from the first shot very dramatically. This is not very good transitions of the scenes. They should of been shot at the same time. The timing for the walking shot is the perfect timing for the shot, the first shot should of been also done at this time so it would make it more darker.

3. Costume.
This costume is not a very convincing male costume. We have decided as a group to cast a male member for our next shoot so it will make it look more realistic.

4. Props
The dinner that has been served is a prime example of the fact we need more realistic props. The use of the celery made it very unrealistic so therefore in the next shoot well have planned to buy a ready meal to make the scene more realistic.

5. Audio
In this first draft in the background you was able to hear some people exchanging conversation. This made it look very unrealistic and not professional